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"Where were you last night?",  Mrs. Edwards asked. 
Mike responded, "I went to the movies with John and Jack to see the new Star Wars movie at 8:50."
Mrs. Edwards asked, "Then why were you seen at Henry's house at 11:00 o'clock ?"
Mike said, "We all went to his house after to go swim in his pool."
Mrs. Edwards asked, "Why was the cops called?"
Mike said, "I wasn't there whenever the cops were called."
"Then why did the report say the cops were called because of Mike Edwards?' , Mrs. Edwards asked. 
"The cops were called because Jack and I got into a small fight. I'll go to my room." Mike said. 

Comments

  1. AddiSeptember 18, 2017 at 10:18 AM

    I liked how this was short and simple. I think all of your grammar is correct.

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  2. EDOctober 12, 2017 at 7:06 PM

    I liked it. It was cool.

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